Our Script
INT: Fade in.
Panning shot of canteen.
*Tom, Steve & Jimmy walk towards Frankie*
*Close up*
Frankie - Hello, welcome to my shop. What can I get for you today?.
*Reverse shot*
Jimmy - Can we get three Mango Blast smoothies please.
*Frankie walks up to fridge. Camera inside fridge shot*
*Reverse mid close up*
Frankie - Sorry there is only one smoothie left.
Tom - Well… I should get it because I'm the smartest.
Steve - I should get it because I'm the strongest.
Jimmy - I should get it because I want it the most
*Jimmy, Steve & Tom start arguing*
No I should get It {So on}
*Cuts to frankie drinking smoothie*
*Cuts to Frankie looking at camera*
Frankie - Sorry I was thirsty.
*Cuts to black*
this script is very funny and interesting, check that you have your punctuation is in the right places before you publish. but I liked it a lot.
ReplyDeleteSup, I liked how you used the colour to outline your characters. You had the fade in at the start and I liked how you added that. I have no feed forward. BYE!
ReplyDeleteHello Anika! I like how you added all the different shots and made the different people different colours.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you could give all the people who made it credit. Because I know we made these in groups!
Overall, I really enjoyed reading that script!