For science, we made towers out of popsicle sticks and playdough and me and poppy came 2nd next, we did lava lamps which did not go that well. we also did catapults me and Kelsey was not that amazing.
Hey, Anika! Great job on this but, I have fedback for you. Always do a capital letter at the start of your sentence and full stops. But good thing you got Kelsey a capital K!
ello ello. I like how you added all the different things that we have made in the past and what happened at the end. Maybe next time you could re-word the last sentence, and some more writing and punctuation.
Godt klaret Goed gedaan Hästi tehtud Hyvin tehty Bien joué Ben feito Gut gemacht Μπράβο
This is a really good piece of writing, but next time try to check your writing before you publish it, so you can make sure that you have capital letters for names. Also instead of saying "me and poppy" you could say "Poppy and I"
Hey, Anika! Great job on this but, I have fedback for you. Always do a capital letter at the start of your sentence and full stops. But good thing you got Kelsey a capital K!
ReplyDeleteello ello. I like how you added all the different things that we have made in the past and what happened at the end.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you could re-word the last sentence, and some more writing and punctuation.
Godt klaret
Goed gedaan
Hästi tehtud
Hyvin tehty
Bien joué
Ben feito
Gut gemacht
Μπράβο
"well done in different languages"
This is a really good piece of writing, but next time try to check your writing before you publish it, so you can make sure that you have capital letters for names. Also instead of saying "me and poppy" you could say "Poppy and I"
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